Matt Bellamy

The last stanza does rhyme, doesn't it? I think this rhymed and flowed well, and an interesting idea. Good job.

I think the short, choppy lines worked really well in giving the feeling on energy, made me read it faster. Capitalising your I's would be good though, but if you ...

"I love so you so much" -One too many so's, I think. Other than that, everyone's pretty much said what I was going to say. I'd prefer the poem though ...

I liked them both. I wasn't sure about the ...? at the end of the first poem, though, it confused me a little. Also, the long line in the second ...

I personally liked the last line. However I have to disagree, titles are relevant. An unnamed poem is like an unnamed baby. Or so I've been told.

Lovely...though I agree with others, the hand looks rather big.

What does Snapple taste like?

Happy belations! 29 days 'til I'm 18...sixteen seems like so long ago :P

Yep yep, I really like it. I want to go write my own novel now...Only one thing though, you asid "He closed his tightly"...he closed his what tightly?

I don't doubt Tolkein's talent and that they are excellent books, but I haven't been able to get into them, I found them quite heavy-going when I tried to read ...

I can imagine this being spoken. Beautiful last line. Good work.

Yeah, I agree. Good rhyming, not forced at all, short and sweet. Good job.

A little halloween cartoon strip I did. I know the colouring is a bit rough, but hey, I'm an impatient person and it was getting late. Hope you like :) ...

I would lick Muse. I can't choose which part of her, but I think she'd taste like pepper.

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